Improving the representation of  anthropogenic CO<sub>2</sub> emissions in climate  models: impact of a new parameterization  for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)

Navarro, Andrés; Moreno, Raúl; Tapiador, Francisco J.

doi:https://doi.org/10.5194/esd-9-1045-2018

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Improving the representation of anthropogenic CO₂ emissions in climate models: impact of a new parameterization for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)

Andrés Navarro, Raúl Moreno, and Francisco J. Tapiador

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RC1: 'Referee Comment', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Mar 2018
- AC1: 'Response to referee #1', Andrés Navarro, 01 Jun 2018
RC2: 'Referee Comments', Anonymous Referee #2, 17 Apr 2018
- AC5: 'Response referee #2', Andrés Navarro, 01 Jun 2018
RC3: 'New dynamical module for C02 emission grid point forecasts and its impact on CESM simulations of precipitation and SST', Svetla Hristova-Veleva, 18 Apr 2018
- AC2: 'Response referee #3', Andrés Navarro, 01 Jun 2018
  - AC6: 'Corrected paragraph (reviewer comment: page 4)', Andrés Navarro, 04 Jun 2018
RC4: 'Referee comment', Anonymous Referee #4, 22 Apr 2018
- AC3: 'Response referee #4', Andrés Navarro, 01 Jun 2018
RC5: 'Review of the manuscript ``Improving the representation of anthropogenic CO2 emissions in climate models: a new parameterization for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)''', Safa Motesharrei, 05 May 2018
- AC4: 'Response referee #5', Andrés Navarro, 01 Jun 2018
  - AC7: 'Corrected paragraph (reviewer comment: page 1)', Andrés Navarro, 04 Jun 2018

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AR: Author's response | RR: Referee report | ED: Editor decision

ED: Reconsider after major revisions (01 Jun 2018) by Yun Liu

AR by Andrés Navarro on behalf of the Authors (04 Jun 2018) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (13 Jun 2018) by Yun Liu

RR by Anonymous Referee #4 (26 Jun 2018)

RR by Safa Motesharrei (02 Jul 2018)

Suggestions for revision or reasons for rejection

2018 JUL 02

Review of the revised manuscript ``Improving the representation of anthropogenic CO2 emissions in climate models: a new parameterization for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)'' by Andr\'{e}s Navarro, Ra\'{u}l Moreno, and Francisco J. Tapiador, submitted to the Journal Earth System Dynamics, European Geosciences Union (EGU).

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I would like to express my gratitude to the Authors for addressing the first round of comments from the Reviewers. The manuscript would be ready for publication following the minor changes described below.

1. Page 2, Line 10: Change ``Human activity was a major driver of change in the Earth System in the recent past (Alter et al., 2017; Barnett et al., 2008; Crutzen, 2002), and it now dominates the natural system (Ruth, et al. 2011).''

To

``Human activity has become a major driver of change in the Earth System, especially over the past several decades (Alter et al., 2017; Barnett et al., 2008; Crutzen, 2002), and it now dominates the natural system in many different ways (Motesharrei et al., 2016; Ruth, et al. 2011).''

2. Page 2, Line 26: Delete ``using the predator-prey model''.

3. Page 5, Line 7: Change ``population dynamics'' to ``population projections''.

4. Page 6, Line 6: Change ``simulating the dynamics of the population'' to ``simulating the observed population''.

5. Page 7, Section 2.3: I think it would be helpful to refer to the newly released CESM2, and mention the possibility of coupling POPEM to CESM2 in the future. See, for example:

Joel, L. (2018), New version of popular climate model released, Eos, 99, https://doi.org/10.1029/2018EO101489. Published on 22 June 2018.

6. Page 15, Line 20: Change ``bidirectional feedback'' to ``bidirectional feedbacks''.

7. Page 15, Line 23: Change ``the counterintuitive feedback that is missing'' to ``the important feedbacks that are missing''.

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End of the review of the revised manuscript ``Improving the representation of anthropogenic CO2 emissions in climate models: a new parameterization for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)''. Submitted by Safa Motesharrei on 2018 JUL 02.

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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (10 Jul 2018) by Yun Liu

AR by Andrés Navarro on behalf of the Authors (11 Jul 2018) Author's response Manuscript

ED: Publish as is (23 Jul 2018) by Yun Liu

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Earth system models provide simplified accounts of human–Earth interactions. Most current models treat CO₂ emissions as a homogeneously distributed forcing. However, this paper presents a new parameterization, POPEM (POpulation Parameterization for Earth Models), that computes anthropogenic CO₂ emissions at a grid point scale. A major advantage of this approach is the increased capacity to understand the potential effects of localized pollutant emissions on long-term global climate statistics.

Improving the representation of anthropogenic CO2 emissions in climate models: impact of a new parameterization for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)

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Improving the representation of anthropogenic CO₂ emissions in climate models: impact of a new parameterization for the Community Earth System Model (CESM)